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Poem i wrote.... tell me what you think
Heres a poem i wrote, and yes, i did write it for someone, but im not gonna say who, and i might not even show it to the person i wrote it for... but anyways... here it goes...
YOUR THE ONE
Your the one i think of when its hard to go to bed.
Your the one persone thats always in my head.
Your the one that makes me cry the tears that i have shed.
Your the one reason why i wish i wasnt dead.
Your the one person that makes me want to say:
I'd rather go to sleep, and awake toanother day.
Your the one reason why i weep and now i pray,
That one day my feelings will all come out, and not be kept at bay.
Your the one that i adore, through the thick and thin.
Your the one I'd fight over, although I'd never win.
Your the one I'd kill over, although it is a sin.
Your the one I'd hate to loose, and think what could have been.
Your the voice i want to hear when all is left unsaid.
Your the face i want to see, but all i see is red.
Your the one that makes me cry the tears that i have shed.
Your the one reason, why i wish i wasnt dead.
Comments
On Mar 17, BrokEn doWn InsIdE said:
wow it's good deep stuff...it's like i feel really what you are saying so thats good...making the reader feel you're pain...GREAT
On Dec 31, rocking roach said:
dont know what to say
On Dec 31, AwesomenessDay said:
awesome...
On Dec 31, Yogi said:
hmm...........the rhyme's r perfect keep it up
On Dec 30, WhatSeparatesMeFromYou(:-Mrs.WilliamsB¡tches!!:D said:
this poem is awesome girlie....and also very deep just like Lucky7 said
On Dec 30, Lucky7 said:
Thats deep, Hope the person it was wrote for gets to see it!
On Dec 30, PINK_ADDICT1 said:
Its a great poem im sure whoever you wrote it for has read it :)